Feature Articles

Feature Articles
What are feature articles?
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A feature story is an article
that is not meant to report
breaking news but instead
takes an in-depth look at issues
behind a news story, often
concentrating on background
events, persons or
circumstances.
What are the components of feature
articles?
 Feature
stories place a greater
emphasis on facts that have human
interest.
 Features
put people in the story;
they make the reader think and
care.
Finding an angle
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Angle- a way of looking at the subject of your
article
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You may write about anyone or anything in a
feature article as long as you have a unique
angle.
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Make your readers look at that subject in a
new way
Finding an angle
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Example:
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Subject of article: Mrs. Macomber
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You don’t want to write a list of everything
about me and my life. That would be boring.
Instead, pick one aspect of me/my life that
you think readers will relate to or find
interesting.
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Angle: Macomber’s experience dancing for
Third Eye Blind in Lion’s 1999 halftime show
News v.s. Feature writing
News articles
Feature articles
Timeliness- deals with current
Timeless- can usually be published
event and must be published soon anytime
Follows inverted pyramid structure Has a more narrative format with a
definite beginning, middle & end
Stresses the 5Ws and 1H
Does not necessarily have 5Ws and
1H; delves deep into subject,
giving a lot of details
Reader can read 1-2 paragraphs
and understand topic
Reader must read entire article to
really understand the subject
Feature article leads
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Remember, we don’t have the 5Ws and 1H with
feature articles.
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Feature leads, sometimes called delayed leads, unfold
more slowly. They allow the writer to tell a story in a
more traditional, narrative way. The objective, of
course, is to draw the reader into the story, to make
them want to read more.
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Think of the lead as more of an “attention getter” from
your other English classes. Feature leads must
introduce your subject and your angle in an interesting
way.
Feature article leads
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Feature leads often use anecdotesshort stories about the subject. Think
of them as scene-setting.
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Feature leads are usually 2-3
paragraphs long!
Sample feature article lead
Here’s a Pulitzer Prize winning example by Andrea Elliott of “The New York
Times”:
The young Egyptian professional could pass for any
New York bachelor.
Dressed in a crisp polo shirt and swathed in cologne,
he races his Nissan Maxima through the rain-slicked streets of
Manhattan, late for a date with a tall brunette. At red lights,
he fusses with his hair.
What sets the bachelor apart from other young men
on the make is the chaperon sitting next to him -- a tall,
bearded man in a white robe and stiff embroidered hat.
Nutgraf
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The nutgraf is where the feature writer lays out
for the reader exactly what the story is all
about.
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It usually follows the first few paragraphs of the
scene-setting or story-telling the writer has
done.
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A nutgraf can be a single paragraph or more.
Sample nutgraf
Continued from the Andrea Elliott article:
"I pray that Allah will bring this couple together," the man, Sheik
Reda Shata, says, clutching his seat belt and urging the bachelor to slow
down.
Christian singles have coffee hour. Young Jews have JDate. But
many Muslims believe that it is forbidden for an unmarried man and woman
to meet in private. In predominantly Muslim countries, the job of making
introductions and even arranging marriages typically falls to a vast network
of family and friends.
In Brooklyn, there is Mr. Shata.
Week after week, Muslims embark on dates with him in tow. Mr.
Shata, the imam of a Bay Ridge mosque, juggles some 550 "marriage
candidates," from a gold-toothed electrician to a professor at Columbia
University. The meetings often unfold on the green velour couch of his
office, or over a meal at his favorite Yemeni restaurant on Atlantic Avenue.
Sample nutgraf
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So now we know – this is the story of a Brooklyn imam who
helps bring young Muslim couples together for marriage.
Elliott could just as easily have written the story with a
hard-news lead like this:
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An imam based in Brooklyn says he works as a chaperone
with hundreds of young Muslims in an effort to bring them
together for marriage.
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That’s certainly quicker. But it’s not nearly as interesting as
Elliott’s descriptive, well-crafted approach.
The remainder of the article
 Let the story unfold naturally.
 The conclusion should pack a punch.
Give us something interesting!
 An easy way to end your article is to
pick a particularly poignant quotation
about the subject.
Some feature article DON’Ts
NEVER:
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Tell the reader what to do. Example: “So the next time
you’re walking down Main Street, stop in at Bagel
Junction…” Nobody likes to be ordered around.
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Knowingly use a cliché. Example: “Actions speak louder
than words.”
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Use the first-person singular (“I,” “me”) or plural (“we,”
“us” “our”), unless it’s a first-person story. Example: don’t
write “He knows more about movies than anyone I’ve ever
met…” even if it’s true. The article isn’t about you!